People who complain,
ie. Omg wut point of this i dnt like cos it not good, dont tell me shutup
^ They dont understand the point of this flash let alone the internets... Go slit your wrist bad reviwers!
Reeks of 4chan (.org)
I guess most people are in agreement that it wasnt the best of the series but meh
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Rule 65: Newfags will vote 5, no exceptions
A word of warning when you submit
When you write short comments like that, and dont a picture to go with you flash, the impatient people will assume that its crap and not bother watching... and the VERY impatient ones might even vote 0 on instinct (the stat whores)
But as for the flash itself, well im not a big fan but I got most of the resemblances XD, thats the kind of animating i like to see on newgrounds is all i can say :O.
And now this review has to be cut short because i must go -.-, kudos!
Thats a first
Its better than half of whats submitted to newgrounds, so thats good enough for me :P, yeah as you said it coulda used some sound... only problem is WHEN you update it wont magically get anymore views and be not noticed.
So mabye If you remake this WITH sound you can pass it off as a number 2.
And... another tip, somehow... parody what this was based of off... dont ask me how :P your the creator you know what your doing :).
Goodluck with your remake
Dammit im british
Mr Ninja is back with his 2nd review o.o,
The fact that you've made this in only four days and get a front page and daily first its well good enough for me, not to mention right after the hordes of pico submissions :O. To be honest I wasnt expecting any flash for a while, because of your last major project.
Anyways as for the flash, the animation was... probably better than anything youve done, higher framerate, tweens and all that makes it alot clearer. The humor is quite different, I did't understand Pc's whole "Durrr!" thing, but it sure as hell was funny. The funniest part was 'Cos of you plenty more people will be suffering from athiritus alot sooner'. I'm an ASSHOLE :D, well that just cracked me up.
I cant really think of what else to say, coursework and lack of sleep have drained me of all creativity T_T. Mabye next time :P
But... i've actually thought of an improvement this time. Its nothing you could've done in this flash but mabye for your future work. If your familiar with the blockhead series, you'll notice that the-swain uses more 3d'ish elements in his flash from episodes 9+ . I dont know if it would actually work because you obviously have diffrent styles. Sort of like what you did in The Not so Final Fantasy 12.
Yeah, I'm not too familiar with this 3d work you're refering to, but I can imagine. I'm personally not a fan of Blockhead, so I haven't the slightest about what 3d elements are used. And I'm always trying to improve things, so perhaps it'll be worked on, perhaps not. My first concern is making things look good and flow well. And yeah, it was a quick one to do, mainly because it's so short and due to the lack of complex movement or even backgrounds. I finished this and released it two days before Pico day, and it was on the front page the day before Pico day, being taken back down when Pico day arrived. It ended up on the front page again a few days after Pico day was over, so it's almost like it got two chances to be on the front page, heh. Not technically, but... you know. *ahem* Thanks for reviewing!
Revoultion Sky Pirate! <3
I see your a unique artist that is very enthusiastic about his work (good thing), and I've watched all your siblings animation/a few others but anyway onto the review!
I think these project could compare to the kind of comic work Egoraptor does, not to mention the animation quality in itself. You've come a long damn way from for first episode of siblings, runesuck just made me laugh so much >_< . I just cant help myself poking around in the sketchbooks until i've read every scrap of your witty banter. Its great that you put in the time and effort to explain your concepts and 'whatever' to the viewers in such a easy and hilarious way, the effort and enthusiasm really stands out to me which is why I guess you could say am A fan :P
Vaan was one of the many reasons I stopped playing this game, and that whole thing... how you had to hack and slash for days on end so you dont get yourself Killed like a bitch later on. Im pretty certain no one could've outlined the issues with Vaan in such a way better than you
"Revolutioooooon, sky pirate!" Had to have been the funniest line my opinion, I dont know why but i love it when someones running off into the distance screaming something so witty XD"
Improvements... erm animation wise? I don't know mabye the shading around the eyes is a bit excessive, or unnecessary ? :S . To be completely honest, animators Have-Their-Limits and to me it seems it looks like your doing enough already, because you mustve spent ages doing this sorta thing. Well I hope you're at least getting what you wanted out of it... I have no idea what your career is like, i'm guessing its along the lines of artistic.... stuff? As long as your doing fine anyway :)
An improvement... actually no its like a suggestion really. Give yourself a break You Desereve it!
I wish I could give myself a break... too many ideas. I should start giving ideas to people so I can quit relying on myself to do so much, you know? Oh well. Thanks for the review, Mr. ninja, the effort is appreciated. I'm really glad to know someone's as obsessive (maybe too strong of a word, but use it I shall!) as I am when it comes to seeing and reading all a flash has to offer, heh... I put all that in there because I know there are some like us out there that love that sort of thing, so why not? Exactly! Thanks again!
How could you!
You have such a great voice... yet you waste it on crummy flashes, seriously! Team up with some animator and do voice acting or whatever, I mean look at where egoraptor was even when he didnt do flash!
you're just hating on my legless/armless stick figures/poorly drawn gun. but thanks lol.
That introduction was perfectly fine!... But then the length and the actual animation let me down, I thought it was going to be really something. Take this animation and extend it seriously! You can get on the front page if you make it longer =(
its a shortie.... the point of it is to be short. hence the name "A Shortie"
Quite intresting actually
Quite unique style of animating/voicing if I may say so myself, the background was perfect, the curtian effects couldve been better, the humor wasn't exactly excellent (except for that, "Ive been in all of your houses at night") That part was hilliarious.
Erm... yeah again the style was diffrent in a good way XD, keep animating ;) - 4/5
Pretty Funny And cute, the drawings are good since you had to use motion tweens , you couldve done better on the mouth animations though.
PS: Dont listen to those evil people that a giving you crap votes just cos its naruto, THEYRE TOO FUCKING NARROW MINDED AND ALL PRICKS...you heard me...
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